Japanese Loves Bath

Mar 19, 2015 12:54
Most Japanese love baths, and get in a bath everyday.

We take average thirty three minutes for a bath, and this is the longest time in the world.

I'm also get in a public bath that is attached to a sport gym everyday.

Since I can relax and feel good by taking a bath, I usually take about an hour for the bath.

I think the public bath is also excellent as a place of communication.

However, when you take Japanese public baths or hot springs, note that there are some bathing etiquette as the followings:

・You must wash your body before you get in a bath.
・You must not put your towels into a bath.
・You must take a shower after you use a sauna.
・You must wipe your body carefully before you return to a changing room.
日本人はお風呂が大好きで、ほぼ全ての人が毎日湯船に浸かります。

お風呂の時間が長い国ランキングでは1位となっており、一日平均33分程入っているそうです。

日本のスポーツクラブには大抵大浴場がついており、私はそこに毎日通っています。

お風呂はリラックスできて気持ちが良いので、私も大抵1時間程度入ります。

また、大浴場はコミュニケーションの場としても優れていると思います。

ただ、日本の銭湯や温泉に入る際は、以下のようなマナーがあるので注意して下さい。

・湯船に浸かる前に体を洗う。
・タオルは湯船の中に入れない。
・サウナに入った後はまずシャワーを浴びる。
・脱衣所に戻る際は体をよく拭く。
No. 1　Alfredo's correction
  • Most Japanese love baths, and get in a bath everyday.
  • Most Japanese love baths and take a bath everyday.
  • We take average thirty three minutes for a bath, and this is the longest time in the world.
  • We take baths for an average thirty three minutes. This is the longest time for baths in the world.
  • I'm also get in a public bath that is attached to a sport gym everyday.
  • I also get in a public bath that is attached to a sports gym everyday.
  • Since I can relax and feel good by taking a bath, I usually take about an hour for the bath.
  • Since I can relax and feel good by taking a bath, I usually spend about an hour in the bathtub.
  • I think the public bath is also excellent as a place of communication.
  • I think public baths are also an excellent as a place of communication.
  • However, when you take Japanese public baths or hot springs, note that there are some bathing etiquette as the followings:
  • However, when you take Japanese public baths or hot springs, be aware that there is bathing etiquette:
  • ・You must wash your body before you get in a bath.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • ・You must not put your towels into a bath.
  • ・You must not put your towels into a bathtub.
  • ・You must take a shower after you use a sauna.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • ・You must wipe your body carefully before you return to a changing room.
  • ・You must dry your body carefully before you return to a changing room.
kanotown
Thank you very much for correcting my post! :)
No. 2　ポー　アレックス's correction
  • Japanese Loves Bath
  • Japanese People Love Baths
  • Most Japanese love baths, and get in a bath everyday.
  • Most Japanese people love baths and get in a bath everyday.
  • We take average thirty three minutes for a bath, and this is the longest time in the world.
  • We take an average of thirty three minutes for a bath. This is the longest time for baths in the world.
kanotown
Thank you so much for correcting me! :)
No. 3　rongpepsi's correction
  • Japanese Loves Bath
  • Japanese people/ the Japanese Loves Baths.
  • Most Japanese love baths, and get in a bath everyday.
  • Most of the Japanese love baths, and get/take in a bath everyday.
  • We take average thirty three minutes for a bath, and this is the longest time in the world.
  • We take average thirty three minutes for a bath, and this is the longest time for baths in the world.
  • I'm also get in a public bath that is attached to a sport gym everyday.
  • I'm also get in a public bath that is attached to a sport gym everyday.
  • Since I can relax and feel good by taking a bath, I usually take about an hour for the bath.
  • Since I can relax and feel good by taking a bath, I usually spend about an hour for bathing each time.
  • I think the public bath is also excellent as a place of communication.
  • I think the public baths are also excellent as/like a place of communication.
  • However, when you take Japanese public baths or hot springs, note that there are some bathing etiquette as the followings:
  • However, when you take Japanese public baths or hot springs, notice that there are some bathing etiquette shown below:
  • ・You must wash your body before you get in a bath.
  • ・You must wash your body before you get in a bath.
  • ・You must wipe your body carefully before you return to a changing room.
  • ・You must dry your body carefully before you return to a changing room.
thank you a lot! i will take care of your suggestion.
kanotown
Thank you so much for correcting my post!
I hope you have a nice stay in Japan. :)
rongpepsi
どうも！！
No. 4　naifu's correction
  • I'm also get in a public bath that is attached to a sport gym everyday.
  • I bathe in a public bath that is attached to a sport gym every day.
    　"Everyday" is an adjective. E.g. This is an everyday thing for me.
    "Every day" is an adverb. E.g. I sleep for seven hours every day.
  • I think the public bath is also excellent as a place of communication.
  • I think public baths are also excellent as a places for communication.
  • ・You must wash your body before you get in a bath.
  • ・You must wash your body before you get into a bath.
    　失礼ですが、正直上の人の添削はおかしいです。
  • ・You must not put your towels into a bath.
  • ・You must not let your towels touch the water of the bath.
    　This is easier to understand.
  • ・You must take a shower after you use a sauna.
  • ・You must take a shower after you use the sauna.
  • ・You must wipe your body carefully before you return to a changing room.
  • ・You must wipe your body carefully before returning to the changing room.
    　"Wipe your body" is perfectly fine. While it isn't wrong, too many "you"s in a sentence isn't very nice.
I like how your posts always teach people something.
kanotown
Thank you so much for your helpful corrections and comments! :)
Hehe, I'm glad to be told that!
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